Writing Poetry posted July 18, 2011 Chapters: -Prologue- 3... 


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Just doin' what it says on the tin

A chapter in the book Freestylin'

Freestylin'

by fairydancer


come take a ride with me
on the free flow
of a thought-show
openly striding
freely confiding
persuasively gliding
happily abiding
all my time
lettin' go
in a natural stream
coaxing my muse to be centre
of the dream
while finding out
what I do, don't seem
to know

learning to grow

always searching for the effectual hammer
a real word slammer
(while trying to keep up with the grammar
...well, after a manner)

seeking that all elusive rhythm
that just sounds right
when the reader takes flight
throwing in the odd rhyme
when it seems the right time
or sucking on a lime
and spitting out the pips
puckering my lips
swaying my hips
to make love with the words
for free-thought
I have bought
through hard-earned experience
needs no dilutin'
or convolutin'
no disreputin'
nor reconstitutin'

and demonstrative words
need no aggressive absurds
so I'll just sit on the boundaries
of what is expected
and duly accepted
until they BURST
for who should tame an imagination
roaming free
who would even want to, see?

but hey, I'm just honing my skills
seeking my thrills
maybe one day, paying some bills!
ha! ha!

but for now I'm
feverishly brainstorming
avidly concept forming
placidly percept-adorning
literally heart-warming
or empathically warning
of life's perils

and it is about life

for a cascade of strife
drips liberally
from a well polished literary knife
and you will see
happiness flies
way above the clouds
in cosmic streams of Orion's paradise
to a poetic mind
every emotion, a treasured find
each life lesson another facet to grind
to an elegiac kind
every atom of creation shined
in the diffractions of a rhythmical prism
the contrasts in life, a schism
of royal-claret sunset polka hue
and all you need do
is read it
and think it
to feel it

God bless you!

x




Thank you so much to John J Mason for this beautiful photograph. I visited this waterfall when I was younger but could not remember where it was. Now, thanks to this artist, I can google it and find it again - THANK YOU :)))

Elegiac = literary, sad or mournful.

Freestyle poetry does not contain a set meter or line structure. It may contain rhymes, but in no set pattern. Free style poetry often has its own rhythm, such as a rant rhythm or rap rhythm and it often takes some careful conjuring to create a natural-feeling rhythm (natural stream.)

Free-thought - a reem of words that just pops into the head and is written down.
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