Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted March 18, 2011 Chapters:  ...41 42 -44- 45... 


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I had a thought...

A chapter in the book Freestylin'

Just a Thought

by fairydancer

what brings a thought to life?
what creates that special something
that empowers us to write?

the flash of
ten thousand neurons
excitedly sparking
in perfect unison
from some scintillating stimulus?

or a flicker of divine consciousness
the energy that gives life
in all its preciousness
flowing through our bodies
with a vital forcefulness

yet energy
can neither be hatched
nor dispatched
merely transformed
into another wonder
of creation
so where does it go when we die?
what happens to our thoughts
our laughter and our cries?

they stay on written page
for an eternity
never to age
but thoughts are fleeting
and fickle
and dissipate with bodies phage

what miracle allows us
free thought?
not just to know
the sky is blue
or
my leg is caught
but to think
"I love you"

each of us vessels
of life's source
has our own theory
of creations force
but whatever that be
it is bigger than the all
an awesome concept to peruse
yet found in the tiniest cell ball

and so is our muse



My Muse writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem, any length, about your muse. Who or what inspires you to write?


A huge thank you to Angelheart for use of this beautiful artwork :)

Free style poem with some rhyming; no punctuation except for questions marks; no capitalisation.

Law of Conservation of Energy = energy can neither be created nor destroyed, only transformed from one form to another...

Phage -- I am using it here to mean DISEASE [short for bacteriophage, a virus that lives within a bacteria.]
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