Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted January 30, 2011 | Chapters: | -1- |
To my husband George...
A chapter in the book What You Mean To Me.
If I Should Wake Before I Die
by fionageorge
Love Poem Poetry Contest Contest Winner
If I should wake before I die I'll take the time to say goodbye I'll let you know how much I care Appreciate that you were there If I should wake before too long I'll let you know that I am strong I did the best that I could do And it was all because of you If I should wake from coma deep I'll let you know that in my sleep I sensed your presence and your love 'twas you that I was dreaming of If I should wake at all my dear I'll hold you close and dry your tear For though my time is at an end You are my love, my life, my friend If I should die before I wake Your essence and your love I'll take Within my soul as I depart And wrap myself around your heart Forever Love ... |
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I wrote this poem back in 2011. This was inspired by a book I was reading entitled: 'If I Should Die Before I Wake', by Andrea Dworkin.
The title made me think... 'What if, for whatever reason, I was in a coma, and I hadn't said what I wanted to say to the love of my life. What would I want my loved one to know?
These things should be said while we can, but do we really think about saying them on a daily basis?
I have revived this as the first chapter in my book entitled, 'What You Mean To Me'. I plan to write a poem or piece of prose to all the people who are, or have been, important to me throughout my life.
I revived this poem, instead of writing a new poem, as I think it totally says what I want to say to my husband... I don't think I could write another poem which will say it better...
Australian English
Thank you so much, Angelheart, for the stunning artwork entitled, 'The Call'. The mystical beauty of this art spoke to me.
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and 2 member cents. The title made me think... 'What if, for whatever reason, I was in a coma, and I hadn't said what I wanted to say to the love of my life. What would I want my loved one to know?
These things should be said while we can, but do we really think about saying them on a daily basis?
I have revived this as the first chapter in my book entitled, 'What You Mean To Me'. I plan to write a poem or piece of prose to all the people who are, or have been, important to me throughout my life.
I revived this poem, instead of writing a new poem, as I think it totally says what I want to say to my husband... I don't think I could write another poem which will say it better...
Australian English
Thank you so much, Angelheart, for the stunning artwork entitled, 'The Call'. The mystical beauty of this art spoke to me.
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