Biographical Poetry posted January 11, 2011 Chapters: 22 23 -24- 25... 


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Another poetic form for Jack the cat

A chapter in the book Pet Stories

The Choka for Jack

by Mustang Patty



Background
This book is comprised of poems - in many different forms - many I never heard of before, and each is dedicated to a pet that has passed through my life, or in a few cases, is still a VERY big part.
It was a low point

When Jack came into my life

The cutest kitten

Mostly Abyssinian

With perfect markings

He brought me joy ev'ry day

Too much pain to bear

On my own or all alone

Jack was my comfort, my cat




The Choka

Another of ancient Japan's many poetic forms; choka may be the longest of them. Choka may be translated as: long poem, the opposite of tanka ('Short poem.') In fact, Choka guidelines dictate a minimum of seven lines, but no maximum.

Like haiku, senryu, and tanka, choka does not rhyme and has specific syllable counts in each line. The most basic choka has three couplets with syllable counts of five and seven per line, plus a last seven-syllable line. This form allows a lengthy poem, using as many 5-7 couplets as the author chooses, then the finishing line. Thus, a nine-line choka would have the following syllable pattern:

5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 5 - 7 - 7

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