General Poetry posted August 18, 2010 Chapters: 3 4 -5- 6... 


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A chapter in the book Emotions of Love and Life

Breakout

by Angel Debbie

Break out

Fear of freedom, lost and alone
Hey Dummy! Pick up the phone.

You've got a friend so near and dear,
She can wipe out your every fear.

Shoulders wide, ready to receive
Everything that you may have to grieve...

From Lovers that have left and went astray
To your Mother who has passed away

Lay your emotions, one by one in her lap
She won't give you a bunch of crap.

She's been there and certainly done that
Now lets sit down and have a lovely chat.

So locked up inside you may feel,
Please tell her, what's the big deal.

Fighting the feeling the freedom to express,
Keep your clothes on she doesn't want you undressed

This time is personal, she will respect
Uncertainly she feels you do detect.

Come on sweet dear please explain
I know your thoughts are driving you insane.

As I tried to look deep within your heart
But now I can't see, where to start.

I love you with my entire God given soul
I want you to shine and not live like a mole.

I need to break the silence you hold within
It's too quiet I can hear the sound of a pin.

This is not you need to be free!
You need to express yourself openly.

As you express, I will listen
Maybe there is something, I've been missing.

Piece by piece released in hurting love
God grants his peace from above.

Releasing emotion and letting go
Makes life better, don't you know.

Feeling the weight of the world on your shoulder
Feels like you're carrying a great big boulder

Release this rock you carried for so long
Put it back on shore where it belongs

Lighter you will feel, you wait and see
You'll live in peace, just like me.

I am living like you on the opposite end
I want my Love to you, I send

My mind I freed, my weight is gone
I'm now seeing life of a brand new dawn.

Won't you join me on this new trip?
Come on now; let's get a grip.




This poem was written with the intent of getting a friend to open up and release all their problems as to make them feel much better instead of feeling as though they were alone to deal with them. And help them to over come their. problems.
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