Horror and Thriller Flash Fiction posted May 7, 2010


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Will I get there first?

There's a Light Up Ahead

by fionageorge

















My stomach scrapes the ground as I crawl under the fence. Storm clouds shroud the moon, and cold wind whips hair into my face.
 
 Ahead, I see a cottage, its light a welcome sight.
 
I must get there before he catches me.
 
As I pull myself up, a cold hand touches my neck. I scream.
 
“Did you really think you’d get away?” he whispers.
 
I can't talk.
 
Can I run for it? Am I fit enough? Or should I give in?
 
“I’ll be a sport. I’ll give you a head start. But, if I catch you … “
 
He’s playing with me.
 
I sprint towards the cottage.
 
I’m almost there. My heart pounds; my legs ache. I’m out of breath.
 
He grabs my collar. I shake him off.
 
Keep going!
 
His hand tugs at my arm. I pull free again.
 
“You’re not getting away,” he growls.
 
I reach the steps and bolt towards the door. He jumps up, creating a shadow on the landing.

“Okay, you win,” I whisper, “your choice of position tonight.”
 
His kiss lingers on my lips and I melt as he carries me into our honeymoon cottage.
 
I do enjoy our little games. 



200 words horror Flash Fiction writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a short flash fiction story between 100 to 200 words based on the themes specified in contest details.


Recognized


Contest Entry:
Write a short flash fiction story between 100 to 200 words based on one of the following themes. The category should be horror/thriller:
The stranger
Shadow on the landing
Sharp fangs
The cat
Horror of the unknown

Prompt stated horror/thriller.
I decided on thriller.
I chose 'A shadow on the landing.'

198 words.

Thank you MinoYasue for the use of your artwork.
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