Fantasy Poetry posted February 20, 2008


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Lament

by Pili Pubul

A star
sheds its petals
over the ocean,
scattering
a million
rays of light,
piercing
the tremulous
colossus waves,
outreaching
for the golden sand.

Wrapped
in songs
from ancient
souls,
convey
their lament
to the night.




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