General Poetry posted May 24, 2024


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City Love

The Meaning of Night

by Carlos' girl

It just seems that day's not fair
All the forces keep us there
And so with the night we dare
Hearts will break and I don't care
 
Something in you beautiful
In a world of dutiful 
Feelings irrefutable
Nighttime it is mutable
 
When the sun sets in the West
My heart it has come undressed 
I will give to you my best
Overflowing, sweetly pressed
 
In the darkness say it all
Night surround the buildings tall
I am knocking down that wall
If it's love then I could fall
 
It's the memory I'll keep
Of your eyes that are so deep
When the morning comes I'll sleep
Walk away and do not weep
 
 


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