General Poetry posted May 13, 2024

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A Potlatch Club entry

Stirring up visions

by JLR

Blustery wind provoking me
while by the sea
I sat

Many thoughts twirl,
a thrill
so suddenly
full view ...


A Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Club entry... A Zeno poem. a poem of 10 lines invented by J. Patrick Lewis syllabic: Blustery wind provoking me
rhyme scheme: abcdefdghd

definition fille: a young women
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Club entry for the "the zeno" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
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