General Poetry posted April 2, 2024


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My first poem I put to paper many years ago.

Love Forever

by Barry Penfold

You are you
I am I 
There is no reason to ask why
Because 
You are you
I am I 
 
Sometimes we do not see eye to eye
But we must learn to pass that by
We often tread a thin line 
And there is so little time.
 
You cannot make me into what you expect
But each other we should respect 
I am the one who has a standard to set
But let's not argue to our regret.
 
Our journeys are separate but together
and just perhaps
Together 
We will love forever.
 



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All about being individual, but still seeking the togetherness of a couple. I have written many poems since, but this one is special to me. Hope you enjoy.
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