Self Improvement Poetry posted April 1, 2024

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A Lune Poem 5-3-5


by kahpot

raindrops always fall

yet ascend

to the clouds above

Lune Poetry Contest contest entry


Write a Lune for this poetry contest. It is a simple and fun form of poetry to write. It has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line. Rhymes are fine but not required. The subject matter is open.
trees never wander (5 syllables)
but still spread (3 syllables)
across open fields (5 syllables)

Thank you seshadri_sreenivasan for the artwork
No matter how many times we fall
someone will always love us
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by seshadri_sreenivasan at

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