General Poetry posted March 29, 2024


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Giggles, silly stage.

Gallstones, love, a surprise!

by Julie G1

Gallstones as big as pizza pies,
Indigestion led to surprise,
Surgeon smiled like Mona Lisa,
Did you eat that much pizza?
Fair, fat and forty,
Fatbuckles you were naughty!
Bells did ring, ting-a-ling,
Samaritan did love bring,
His pizza still shines in my eyes,
Prime loving-grey sighs,
Is this  our silly stage? I say,
"Looks like it!" Well, ole! 

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Moons, Eyes, and Pizza Pies writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Similes and metaphors welcome! But make it unique! Stay away from cliched comparisons and think outside the box. (Opps. That was a cliche wasn't it?) Let's hear your most thought provoking observations and parallels. Make our minds work, but make the relationship clear. Refrain from drawing unusual comparisons and leaving them unexplained.
(A poetic format is preferred, but if you feel your particular metaphor would be better suited to prose that is perfectly okay as well.)
Happy imagining!


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