General Poetry posted March 3, 2024


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Homelessness from a privileged perspective

Shame and hunger

by Pangalactic

He ate with his hands
 
Eyes dodging the passers-by
 
Careless of the dirt



Write A Senryu writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
A senryu is a three line Japanese poem structurally similar to haiku. It is unrhymed and the subject is based human nature. Line 1 - 5 syllables - Line 2 - 7 syllables - Line 3 - 5 syllables. I


Homelessness is a very big problem for many people in my city. Scattered throughout are "tent town" encampments where those without homes gather together and erect portable shelters for as long as the police will let them.
It is a sad state of affairs.
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