General Fiction posted January 11, 2024


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The Crossing

by jmdg1954

100 Word Story Contest Winner 


 


 

Joey stood at the ticket window to purchase entry for the same movie he’s seen daily for two weeks. 

Ticket seller, “Hello, Joey”. 

“One ticket for the 2:15 showing, thank you.”

“For, The Crossing?”

“Yes, please.”

Inside, the ticket checker identified him, “Hello, Joey. The Crossing, again today?” 

"Yes."

“What is so exceptional about the movie to see it daily?”

"There's this one scene," Joey said.

"Which one?" 

"Where the curvaceous actress disrobes for a swim in the lake. Every day the train passes and blocks my view. One day that train has to be late."

The ticket checker grinned.



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Write a story of 100 words. not including the title. Any subject accepted. Must be exactly 100 words.

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