General Poetry posted January 5, 2024


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The roaring wave gives way to peace in God's presence.

The Wave

by J'nea D'on

My numb mind aches from the chaos within.
It needs to stop, if I only knew when.

White noise clattering as I ponder here.
Static deafens the loud sounds in my ear.

I surrender and open my arms wide
But I still hear the silent cries inside.

I see the roaring wave as tears stream down,
Yet I still hear turmoil's deafening sound.

Breathe in deep to feel the life sigh out loud.
I scream at the air; to my knees, I fall.

Waves wash o'er me like a blanket of love.
Peace comes as I give thanks to You above.


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