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Haiku for the Haiku Club

A chapter in the book 2023 Gypsy's Clubs

After the Long Drought

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Haiku Club, please check my author notes
 
 
after the long drought

      rain clouds glide across the sky  —

dewdrops full of hope
 
 
 




HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. It was created in the 17th century by Zen Monk, Matsuo Basho. Haiku alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English and Japanese syllables are different. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation.


click here to read haiku examples

click here to read haiku rules


click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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Club entry for the "DUSK OR DAWN HAIKU" event in "HAIKU CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
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