Romance Poetry posted November 21, 2023


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my wife retired from the US Army

My Favorite Vet

by jake cosmos aller

In Their Memory Contest Winner 
Maria Lee met her husband.
On a bus in South Korea
It was love at first sight.

“Ishimchoshim
Spars flew from heart to heart.”
As Koreans say.

They got married
Two months later.

When she immigrated
A few years later
She joined the US Army
Eventually becoming an officer.

Becoming the first Korean-born
Female officer to be stationed in Korea.

She was a pioneer one of the first.
Asian females in a still mostly white male
American-born upper-class officer corps.

She often was
the only Asian-born person
In the room.

She felt daily discrimination.
And that she was not accepted
But she stuck with it.

Retired after twenty years.
Of service in the U.S., and Korea.

After her retirement
She traveled the world.
With her Foreign Service husband.

Managed her husband’s career.
And their investments
Including rental properties.

When he retired
They were together 24/7.

And she felt at peace.
Happy together as they were still.
Madly in love.
Falling in love again and again.


Writing Prompt
Write a poem, any type, about the members of the military present and past.

In Their Memory
Contest Winner


My wife served in the US Army, retiring as a major after twenty-two years of service to her adopted country. She was the first Korean-born female U.S. Army officer to serve in Korea and was a pioneer in so many ways.
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