Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted February 27, 2023 Chapters: 3 4 -5- 6... 


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Sometimes we can't see beyond hope.

A chapter in the book Red Skeletons

Paralyzed by your Promises

by Mia Twysted

Paralyzed by your promises

I cannot see the truth

My gaze is obstructed

By the spider web, you spin

 

Paralyzed by your promises

I spend hours alone

Wondering what I have done wrong

To make you so distant

 

Paralyzed by your promises

I sing sad songs

Desperately judging myself

For not being enough

 

Paralyzed by your promises

I get lost in the haze

Leaving my mind to wander

If I am not better off dead

 

Paralyzed by your promises

This world I leave

Wishing I could have been

More of the woman you need


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