Romance Poetry posted February 6, 2023


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An octelle for the Potlatch Club

More Than You Know

by June Sargent



You're more than just a saxophone
that soothes me with your mellow tone.

You understand my sadness
and never judge my madness.

When nerves are wrought I'm manic,
but you don't let me panic.

You're more than just a saxophone
that soothes me with your mellow tone.



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Octelle: 8 lines with syllable count of 88777788 and rhyme scheme of aabbccaa. The first two lines are the same as the last two.

This form uses personification and symbolism to express thought, ideas and feelings.
Club entry for the "~ Octelle ~ week of 2-4-2023 ~" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.

Artwork by ChuckWaxman at FanArtReview.com

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