| General Fiction posted January 24, 2023 |
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Do smartphones really make things easier to accomplish?
Will It Rain Today?
by teols2016
“Will it rain today?” I asked.
“I do not see Jason Cave in your contacts,” my phone replied.
I sighed and tried again.
“Will it rain today?”
“I found Kay’s Bar and Grill on 8th Street,” my phone replied. “Do you want that one?”
“No,” I growled. “Will it rain today?”
“I’m sorry,” my phone replied. “I do not understand.”
Running late already, I was ready to hurl the thing against the wall.
“Will it rain today?” I asked, my frustration boiling.
“It’s raining right now,” my phone replied.
I looked out the window and saw the growing downpour. Fabulous.
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“Will it rain today?” I asked.
“I do not see Jason Cave in your contacts,” my phone replied.
I sighed and tried again.
“Will it rain today?”
“I found Kay’s Bar and Grill on 8th Street,” my phone replied. “Do you want that one?”
“No,” I growled. “Will it rain today?”
“I’m sorry,” my phone replied. “I do not understand.”
Running late already, I was ready to hurl the thing against the wall.
“Will it rain today?” I asked, my frustration boiling.
“It’s raining right now,” my phone replied.
I looked out the window and saw the growing downpour. Fabulous.
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