General Poetry posted November 6, 2022


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Sadness is a chemical imbalance

Born with Depression

by Raul1

Some people can't erase depression
they were born with it
feeling sad is all they can do
it's hard to shake it off
 
Their minds are in hell
the only hell you'll experience
is in your mind
 
All they have is negative thoughts
sadness is melting their soul
they can't get rid of it
 
Nobody is your friend
those persons always live lonely
those are the hands they are dealt with
they have a tough social life



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