General General posted October 21, 2022 |
Hailu* 5-7-5 (black kettle whistles)
romance with a cup of tea
by Mark D. R.
black kettle whistles
as white vapors spiral up ~
romantic Red Rose
black kettle whistles
as white vapors spiral up ~
romantic Red Rose
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*Hailu poem format is my personal amalgam of a Haiku (5-7-5 syllable lines) and a Jack Collom (3-5-3 word lines) Lune format.
credit artwork to FanArt
Red Rose is a tea brand, but the painting shows a romantic reddish rose.
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Red Rose is a tea brand, but the painting shows a romantic reddish rose.
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