Romance Poetry posted October 3, 2022


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Somonka for the Japanese Poetry Club

Ethereal Beams

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes

translucent moonlight

plunges through slanted shutters

that bathes me in blue

remembering my love bites

all over your bare body

how can I forget

our insatiable hunger

for each other’s touch

your sweltering silky skin

and your beautiful blue eyes





The Somonka, is a Japanese verse of 2 TANKA unrhymed poems (5/7/5/7/7 - 5/7/5/7/7) exchanged between all types of love: lovers, parents, children, etc ... in a statement and response: example = wife writes tanka for husband, husband responds with his own tanka for her. UnrhymedThe earliest Somonkas can be found as far back as the 1st century AD. click here, if you like, for more information ; click here if you want to read more

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Hope rises like a phoenix from the ashes of shattered dreams." ~ S.A. Sachs

Club entry for the "SOMONKA POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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