Once My Dazzling Star

Once my blazing star dazzling in my firmament

A delicious pleasure, a brilliant thing of coveted dreams

Your celestial beams pierced deep into my eyes

Your lips dripped Bacchus’s intoxicating gift

When hungering for your lips, I can only wish

Only in dreams now do I taste your sweet wine

I shout on the wind, my forlorn words fall dim

Because you surrendered your brillance to another

My sky churning dark with vile storm clouds

So treasured are you, my light, my star
Still the very thought of you has the

Power to warm my lonely mind

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Love Poem writing prompt entry

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Write a love poem without using the words love, kiss, romance, soul,heart,boyfriend, girlfriend, husband wife or sexual terms.

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