General Poetry posted August 8, 2022


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It hurt

My Best Friend Betrayed Me.

by pookietoo


My best friend betrayed me.
I don't know what to do.
He took my girl away
And stole her heart too.

One day I'll forgive him,
When my pain goes away.
He "stabbed me with a knife,"
And I just want to cry.

When I confronted him,
He made me feel so low.
He laughed and laughed and laughed.
This hurt more than you know.

God, heal my aching heart.
Give me comfort, cheer.
Listen to what I say.
Let me feel you near.
 

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Betrayal writing prompt entry
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