| General Fiction posted April 16, 2022 |
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She received the doll she wanted
Susan's Best Christmas Ever
by pookietoo
All six-year-old Susan wanted for Christmas was a doll that blinked and talked. Her two older sisters already had this doll. Her dad said, "I have tried to find this doll. I can't find her anywhere."
When Christmas Day came, she received toys and picture books but no doll. She started to cry. Her dad said, "Look in the tree." She opened the gift her dad had hidden. It was the doll she wanted! She couldn't thank her dad enough.
Surprise! 80 Words or Less writing prompt entry
All six-year-old Susan wanted for Christmas was a doll that blinked and talked. Her two older sisters already had this doll. Her dad said, "I have tried to find this doll. I can't find her anywhere."
When Christmas Day came, she received toys and picture books but no doll. She started to cry. Her dad said, "Look in the tree." She opened the gift her dad had hidden. It was the doll she wanted! She couldn't thank her dad enough.
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Writing Prompt Write a complete story in 80 words or less. The theme is 'Surprise.' You may incorporate this theme into the story any way you wish, but it must somehow relate to the topic. |
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