Romance Poetry posted January 20, 2022


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A cascade poem for the Potlatch Challenge

Orchid in the Rain

by June Sargent

An orchid lying in the rain

Reminding me of how you left

My love you simply tossed away



Though innocence appealed at first

Your boredom grew and I became

An orchid lying in the rain



With hopes that you would change your mind

A river of warm tears ran cold

Reminding me of how you left



As sun breaks through and orchids bloom

Lost innocence will not forget

My love you simply tossed away






Cascade

Cascade, a form created by Udit Bhatia, is all about receptiveness, but in a smooth cascading way like a waterfall. The poem does not have any rhyme scheme; therefore, the layout is simple. Say the first verse has three lines. Line one of verse one becomes the last line of verse two. To follow in suit, the second line of verse one becomes the last line of verse three. The third line of verse one now becomes the last line of verse four, the last stanza of the poem. See the structure example below:

a/b/c, d/e/A, f/g/B, h/i/C

Club entry for the "~ Cascade ~ week of 1-19-2022 " event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
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