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eighty word flash fiction entry

A chapter in the book Short Stories

Echoes of an Overture

by GregoryCody


Becky was awake. 

The ungrateful iguana wanted food again.

Such awful pets - never satisfied - terrarium littered with fecal effigies of half-digested cricket bodies. 

I dreaded watching the scaled beast feed - her dead gaze like doll eyes.

People say crickets don't feel pain.

***

I hope they're right. 

The scoop swallowed my shadow. 

Frantic legs cut across themselves, emitting shrilled melodies like wailing violin bows - crooked and shiny.

My desperate overture echoed within the glass arena ... farewell performance before a monster.




80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry

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Funny story is that we bought our two boys 2 Fancy Leopard Geckos.

I didn't realize that they ONLY eat "live" crickets.

Everyone laughs and thinks it's cool to feed them. It's not.

It's cruel for some reason. I don't know why but I just feel bad for them.

They think I'm crazy. But did you know crickets could scream?

Because I do.

Lol


Thank you for reading!!


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