General Fiction posted December 14, 2021 | Chapters: | -1- 2... |
eighty word flash fiction entry
A chapter in the book Short Stories
Echoes of an Overture
by GregoryCody
Becky was awake.
The ungrateful iguana wanted food again.
Such awful pets - never satisfied - terrarium littered with fecal effigies of half-digested cricket bodies.
I dreaded watching the scaled beast feed - her dead gaze like doll eyes.
People say crickets don't feel pain.
***
I hope they're right.
The scoop swallowed my shadow.
Frantic legs cut across themselves, emitting shrilled melodies like wailing violin bows - crooked and shiny.
My desperate overture echoed within the glass arena ... farewell performance before a monster.
80 Word Flash Fiction contest entry
Becky was awake.
The ungrateful iguana wanted food again.
Such awful pets - never satisfied - terrarium littered with fecal effigies of half-digested cricket bodies.
I dreaded watching the scaled beast feed - her dead gaze like doll eyes.
People say crickets don't feel pain.
***
I hope they're right.
The scoop swallowed my shadow.
Frantic legs cut across themselves, emitting shrilled melodies like wailing violin bows - crooked and shiny.
My desperate overture echoed within the glass arena ... farewell performance before a monster.
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Funny story is that we bought our two boys 2 Fancy Leopard Geckos.
I didn't realize that they ONLY eat "live" crickets.
Everyone laughs and thinks it's cool to feed them. It's not.
It's cruel for some reason. I don't know why but I just feel bad for them.
They think I'm crazy. But did you know crickets could scream?
Because I do.
Lol
Thank you for reading!!
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and 2 member cents. I didn't realize that they ONLY eat "live" crickets.
Everyone laughs and thinks it's cool to feed them. It's not.
It's cruel for some reason. I don't know why but I just feel bad for them.
They think I'm crazy. But did you know crickets could scream?
Because I do.
Lol
Thank you for reading!!
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