General Poetry posted October 22, 2021


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My flaw is to be perfect.

Seeking Perfection

by Raul1

My flaw is seeking perfection,
I have failed at it already,
my life is imperfect,
but, I am blind to see
the truth.

I want to be perfect
is imperfection,
when I was young
I had half of my mistakes.

How can I be perfect
if I didn't master math,
which doesn't mean you are.
I thought I was exceptional
in life, but not even close.

You can say that my flaw
is looking to be perfect,
I guess I was wrong
for it to be possible.

It is impossible
for I have learned the hard way,
the only way to be is
to look for imperfection.

From day one, I have failed
to be perfect.
It was at least a flaw try.

The humans are 
not perfect.

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I Am Not Perfect writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a flaw that you see in yourself.


We all aren't perfect, but we can learn from our mistakes, and get it right the next time.
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