There is a hole...

by royowen

Mono meld - There is a hole ...

There is a hole
within my soul,
that must be filled or pay the toll.
Perhaps some hope or burning coal.
That fills the hole within my soul.

Can there be hope,
on this fate's slope?
It gives me death, am I a dope?
Where can I search, perchance to grope?
There must be hope on this fate's slope.

Is there a God
on Earth's dark sod?
And is there faith on paths I've trod.
Is my reward sin's cruel rod?
I must find God on Earth's dark sod.

I found a ray
on one fine day,
as I drove home along the way,
I felt such love, I said, "please stay."
God shone a ray on one fine day.

R.Owen 11/09/2021

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September
2021

This is a new form called a Monomeld
It is made up of one or more stanzas in 5 lines of 4/4/8/8/8 syllables,
all in monorhyme. with the last line repeated with a slight answer variant to the first two lines,
Thank you.

I was apprehended by God one evening on my way home from work, it was nothing like anything IÃ???Ã??Ã?Â¢??ve experienced before or since.
I believe it was a taste of Heaven, it was so incredible, I believe it was the promise that Jesus made in John 14:2

John 14:2 In my Fathers house are many mansions, if it were not so I would have told you. I go to prepare a place for you. I will come back and take you to be with me that you also will be where I am.

Thank you for reading. Roy Owen.
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There is a hole...

by royowen

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