Romance Poetry posted June 19, 2021


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A Canzonetta for the Potlatch Challenge

Where Sunflowers Bloom

by June Sargent

His smile did catch me by surprise ~
'twas more than a fleeting glance.
And drown l did in sapphire eyes,
as my heart began to dance.
In state of dreamlike joy and bliss,
we waltzed around the room.
That night we shared a passionate kiss
in a garden where sunflowers bloom.

Much time has passed since that first kiss ~
I felt like the belle of the ball.
His sapphire eyes I truly miss.
In memories I'll recall
my precious days with the one I adore
to break through clouds of gloom.
I know we'll meet and kiss once more
in a garden where sunflowers bloom.




This Canzonetta or Canzonet is a variation of the canzone, a lyric poem of varying line length and metrical patterns. The Canzonetta consists of at least two octaves, and each octave uses a series of alternating couplets. The last line or last phrase is repeated in each stanza of the subsequent stanzas. The rhyme scheme is thus:
a. b. a. b. c. d. c. D. e.f.e.f.g.d.g.D.
or
a. b. a. b. c. b. c. B. d.b.d.b.e.b.e.B
The latter one is called Canzonetta Prime and the use of a repeating rhyme word is helpful but not mandatory in order to strengthen the repetition bond. There is no set meter or line length.
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