His Destiny

by JLR

He sauntered in the marshland mist.
His footsteps he had never missed.
Never had he his, footsteps missed.
He sauntered in the marshland mist.

'Twas early, near dawn, the grey stays.
He thought the path went on a ways.
The path, he thought, went on a ways.
'Twas early, near dawn, the grey stays.

Melodic harp strings heard strumming.
Toward heaven he gazed, humming.
He gazed toward heaven, humming.
Melodic harp strings heard strumming.

He sauntered in the marshland mist.
His footsteps had he never missed.
'Twas early, near dawn, the grey stays.
He thought the path went on a ways.
Melodic harp strings heard strumming.
He gazed toward heaven, humming.

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March
2021

Potlatch Poetry Club- Atrina week of 3-19-2021
AN ATRINA:
*A poem of 18 lines, consisting of 3 quatrains and a sestet.
*each line has 8 syllables.
*Rhymed: AaaA BbbB CccC AaBbCc where the capital letters indicate refrain lines.
this is your rhyme scheme ~
(AaaABbbBCccCAaBbCc)[rhyme scheme here]

*The first and last lines in each verse are exactly the same.
*The third line in each verse is of similar wording to the second line or reversed [original author prefers to use the same words but reversed.
*Then when you have written the three verses.
the fourth verse consists of the first two lines from each of the three verses.

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