General Poetry posted January 6, 2021


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5/7/5 senryu

Grandma's Jasmine Scent

by Gypsy Blue Rose


for rules, please check my author notes
 

on cold wintry night,

cuddling under knitted throw —

grandma's jasmine scent



 


 



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Senryu is a Japanese short poetic form similar to haiku but focuses on people and it doesn't require a season word (kigo). Syllable count is 5/7/5 OR LESS. It portrays the characteristics of human beings. A common misconception about senryu is that it is exclusively a satirical and or humorous poetic genre. There's another side of senryu, a more serious side that expresses the misfortunes, the hardships, and woe of humanity. It goes back to late 18th century Japan.

Thank you for reading my senryu,

Gypsy
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