Spiritual Poetry posted January 4, 2021


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Spaceship shaped poem.

God Direct My Path

by patcelaw

 
God
put my feet
on the path that leads me
from all temptation, help me to see
the direction You'd have me take so that I might
live a life that is closer to You.
Keep me on the straight path
so I will
win
in
the race You
set before me each day.
Teach me to glorify Your Name and sing praises
about Your unconditional love
for me and all men
so others
may
see in the paths I take, Your righteousness and they too might
want to have You direct their paths so they'll praise You as well.


-Patricia Lawrence
1-4-21



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This is a double spaceship formatted poem with a landing pad. The syllable count for each spaceship is as follows 1,3,6,9,12,9,6,3,1and the pad is two lines of any syllable count. I created this format several years ago and use it many times. It does not need to rhyme, but can if you want. It is really not a very difficult format so I would encourage you to try to do one.
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