Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted November 30, 2020 | Chapters: | ...18 19 -21- 23... |
The warm comfort of freezing to death
A chapter in the book Renga Two
Frozen Serenity
by Badger_29
"Slowly but surely the sea is freezing over". Robert Falcon Scott
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A 7-7 couplet to follow Lucy's 575 stanza titled
Here We Rest:
majestically
calving compassion's tombstone
deep navy realms wait
My sincere appreciation to avmurray of FanArtReview.com for the wonderful picture titled
Hymn at the end of the Journey,
which I found to be very appropriate for this theme.
It also reminded me of the musicians who continued to play right up to the very end of the actual incident.
This doesn't surprise me, as I just saw a documentary on the real Titanic, footage from the actual voyage, and the conviction in the eyes of those who survived as they described how they felt.
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Pays
one point
and 2 member cents. Here We Rest:
majestically
calving compassion's tombstone
deep navy realms wait
My sincere appreciation to avmurray of FanArtReview.com for the wonderful picture titled
Hymn at the end of the Journey,
which I found to be very appropriate for this theme.
It also reminded me of the musicians who continued to play right up to the very end of the actual incident.
This doesn't surprise me, as I just saw a documentary on the real Titanic, footage from the actual voyage, and the conviction in the eyes of those who survived as they described how they felt.
Please, if you would like to add a chapter to this book of renga, read these instructions then copy and paste to your author notes. If you need help, please do not hesitate to contact Gypsy Blue Rose.
Steps to Post a Chapter:
click on the ADD CHAPTER icon, located above the review box.
If the last poem is a 5/7/5 stanza, write a 7/7 couplet, if the last poem is a 7/7 couplet write a 5/7/5 stanza. Write about the SAME THEME of the previous chapter but please don't REPEAT words.
Post your poem as usual but it will be part of the book. A copy will go to your portfolio and you keep your reviews.
(If you would like to read the previous chapters, copy and paste this link to your browser).
https://www.fanstory.com/chapterdetails.jsp?id=39791
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