Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted December 4, 2020


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simile 5-7-5 (the fun house mirror)

icy shapes of winter

by Mark D. R.

the fun house mirror
ripples with uncertain shapes
like a pond's ice cracks

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5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 that has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.


Thanks to FanArtist for an undistorted vision of a woman in a different mirror. Our country's current political divisiveness is akin to that fun house mirror image - viewpoints through different lenses.
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