General Poetry posted October 23, 2020


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Growing, overcrowded citys no longer a place for retirement

Goodbye Vancouver

by Brad Bennett

Ocean city home
last I touch your magic shore
farewell ever more
 
 



5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 Poem! This is a poem with only three lines. The catch is there is a strict syllable count. The first line has 5 syllables, second 7, third 5 again.


There's so much strife around in this world, but we all have our magic place. My Daughter and my grand children are there, when I think of this beautiful city I see them, and a thousand memories. Hopefully when they will see this post on this site, they will think of me, and visit me always.
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