General Poetry posted October 23, 2020

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Haiku ('bove snowy mountains)

Raptor Takes Winter Flight

by Mark D. R.

'bove snowy mountains
twilight melts into darkness 
hawk reconnaissance

5-7-5 writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a 5-7-5 Poem! This is a poem with only three lines. The catch is there is a strict syllable count. The first line has 5 syllables, second 7, third 5 again.

Thanks to FanArtist for digital art image.

Some may feel that 'aeries' is a better word choice than 'mountains' and better reflects the artwork. But for me, mountains is plural and aerie works well in singular) and melt, as an alliteration device, go better together (-;
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