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With their call stalled, Liz & Linda begin walking
by Liz O'Neill
Two stranded women begin walking into a memorable adventure
Chapter 1

The Light

Posted June 2, 2020
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Liz & Linda have discovered a suspiciously guarded house
Chapter 2

The Window

Posted June 11, 2020
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We get to look inside the house
Chapter 3

The Plan

Posted June 19, 2020
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One will run up the hill
Chapter 4

The Hill

Posted June 30, 2020
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The plan is carried out and they go toward a cave
Chapter 5

The Cave

Posted July 6, 2020
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The freed teens begin to tell their horrendous stories
Chapter 6

Darkness

Posted July 15, 2020
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Eyes of the Owl find the backpacks
Chapter 7

Dear Rabbit

Posted July 24, 2020
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Things become real for everyone especially Liz
Chapter 8

The Nightmare

Posted August 1, 2020
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Strong Heart tells her story
Chapter 9

What Could Be Worse?

Posted August 14, 2020
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They finally come to water
Chapter 10

Water

Posted August 22, 2020
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There is a path under the falls
Chapter 11

Wolf

Posted August 27, 2020
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The teens see the panorama of their Reservation
Chapter 12

The Marquee

Posted September 3, 2020
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Making their way toward those waiting
Chapter 13

Land Filled With Pain and Love

Posted September 10, 2020
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Liz & Linda reflect on previous events
Chapter 14

How Did We Get Here?

Posted September 23, 2020
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The car has stalled on their journey & they are hungry
Chapter 15

A Very Special Speck

Posted October 3, 2020
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Liz and Linda focus on the basket with the unusual guest
Chapter 16

The Basket

Posted October 10, 2020
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The women had dreams after drinking the liquid
Chapter 17

Feathers

Posted October 15, 2020
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Our women are considering following a chainsaw sound
Chapter 18

The Lumpy Hills

Posted October 21, 2020
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Liz & Linda need motivation to go on
Chapter 19

Berries for a Reward

Posted November 5, 2020
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Liz and Linda need to cross a swamp
Chapter 20

The Swamp

Posted November 15, 2020
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Liz & Linda hear a strange sound
Chapter 21

Schwit, schwit, schwit

Posted November 24, 2020
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They see mysterious, yellow lights
Chapter 22

Mysterious Lights

Posted December 1, 2020
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The ladies see a speck that is not Kai Zita
Chapter 23

A Speck of a Different Sort

Posted December 7, 2020
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The mystery of the lights is solved
Chapter 24

That's What It Was

Posted December 14, 2020
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The Ladies are sitting in a car near raging brush fires
Chapter 25

Questions Abound

Posted December 28, 2020
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The questions are slowly being answered.
Chapter 26

Nearing the Finish Line

Posted January 2, 2021
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Tommy suggests they get some sleep
Chapter 27

Healing Dreams

Posted January 12, 2021
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Liz & Linda tell about the healing dreams they had
Chapter 28

Telling of the dreams

Posted January 28, 2021
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The adventures in the cave are recounted
Chapter 29

Memories of the Cave

Posted February 9, 2021
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Tommy continues his harrowing account.
Chapter 30

The Maelstrom

Posted February 28, 2021
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Tommy tells the two ladies about his discovery of the falls.
Chapter 31

Back of the Falls

Posted March 21, 2021
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Her sister's spirit was present during this incident
Chapter 32

Spring Blossom's Sister

Posted March 30, 2021
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Tommy tells of discovering two mysterious bags.
Chapter 33

That Second Bag

Posted April 6, 2021
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Tommy and Squirrel saw many colors on the floor.
Chapter 34

Many Beautiful Colors

Posted April 15, 2021
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Tommy explains why he became a chef
Chapter 35

The Pot Roast

Posted April 27, 2021
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Liz and Linda tell stories of helping abused women
Chapter 36

Magnificent Movers

Posted May 6, 2021
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Linda sees Liz hesitate to answer Tommy
Chapter 37

Linda's Distraction

Posted May 15, 2021
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The ladies tell Tommy of their strange experience in their c
Chapter 38

Their Backstory

Posted May 24, 2021
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The cars are finally moving west
Chapter 39

Heading West

Posted June 10, 2021
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Tommy tells about the story of the blanket.
Chapter 40

The Blanket

Posted June 26, 2021
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Liz wonders about different colors instead of black.
Chapter 41

Green is Black

Posted July 8, 2021
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Tommy finally gets to tell his story
Chapter 42

Why Crow is Black

Posted July 19, 2021
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The group has reached their destination
Chapter 43

The Brow of the Hill

Posted July 28, 2021
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The knick-knacks are covered with white sheets.
Chapter 44

Sheets Everywhere

Posted August 7, 2021
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The group discusses complications with the car
Chapter 45

Complications

Posted August 15, 2021
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Led by a coffee scent they search for a way in
Chapter 46

Burnt Coffee

Posted August 26, 2021
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The garage guy acts and looks like Don Knotts
Chapter 47

Don Knotts

Posted September 7, 2021
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We find out what garage guy requires for collateral
Chapter 48

Collateral

Posted September 16, 2021
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The group is taking a dirt road to the highway
Chapter 49

The Fork

Posted September 28, 2021
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Their journey becomes a metaphor
Chapter 50

Twists and Turns

Posted October 9, 2021
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Wolf is requiring identification from Liz
Chapter 51

The Card

Posted October 17, 2021
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Wolf is testing the authenticity of the card
Chapter 52

What next

Posted October 26, 2021
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Liz has everyone pull over to look at some trees.
Chapter 53

The Special Tree

Posted October 30, 2021
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There are twists and turns on the road they are traveling
Chapter 54

The Switchbacks

Posted November 7, 2021
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