General Poetry posted August 25, 2018


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Pantoum for Potlatch Poetry

Cicada Choir

by damommy


Cicadas chirping in the trees -
they reach a raucous, deafening roar,
while humming in soft summer breeze
as they have done for years before.
 
They reach a raucous, deafening roar,
to herald hottest time of year
as they have done for years before,
performing seasonal premiere.
 
To herald hottest time of year,
they proudly sing their insect song
as they have done for years before,
this massive, ever surging throng.
 
They proudly sing their insect song,
a most enthusiastic choir.
This massive, ever surging throng
will serenade ‘til I retire.
 
A most enthusiastic choir.
while humming in soft summer breeze
will serenade ‘til I retire.
Cicadas chirping in the trees.




Rhyming Poem contest entry

Recognized


The pantoum consists of a series of quatrains rhyming ABAB in which the second and fourth lines of a quatrain recur as the first and third lines in the succeeding quatrain; each quatrain introduces a new second rhyme as BCBC, CDCD. The first line of the series recurs as the last line of the closing quatrain, and third line of the poem recurs as the second line of the closing quatrain, rhyming ZAZA.

The design is simple:

Line 1
Line 2
Line 3
Line 4

Line 5 (repeat of line 2)
Line 6
Line 7 (repeat of line 4)
Line 8

Last stanza:

Line 2 of previous stanza
Line 3 of first stanza
Line 4 of previous stanza
Line 1 of first stanza

Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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