General Poetry posted November 14, 2021


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A Rondaful

Miracles Unseen

by damommy

 
I wonder how the gentle breezes blow
without a sound but whispers in my ear,
and softly touch the blossoms as they go.
They are unseen.
 
In Nature’s world, small miracles abound
and only seen when looking with a clear
desire to see the tiny marvels found.
These mysteries.
 
I wonder how they are unseen
in Nature’s world, these mysteries.

 



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November
2021


This form, the Rondaful, was created by Dolly. I hope I've done it justice.

Rondaful created by Dollyâ??s Poem

Two stanzas and a couplet, syllable count: (10,10,10,4) (10,10, 10, 4) (8,8). Written in iambic pentameter. The first four syllables and the last four syllables in stanza one and two, are repeated in consecutive order in the final couplet.

It is best to write the final couplet first and then create your poem around this.

The rhyme scheme is indicated below.

x x x a x x x x x b
x x x x x x x x x c
x x x x x x x x x b
x x x x

x x x x x x x x x d,
x x x x x x x x x c
x x x x x x x x x d
x x x a

x x x a x x x x
x x x x x x x a

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