fantastic flash, starts right away and stays engaging throughout, and ends brilliantly.
Nice surprise ending
Love the great ending!
Wow, great story. Wish cancer wasn't red ... I kinda like red. Best of luck.
Good solid entry and richly sardonic. Well penned. Good luck.
It made me feel sorry for a vacuum - I had to vote for it.
Love the hoover
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