I laughed, and then felt guilty for laughing, but all-in-all, this entry is brilliant and very much squelchable!
I really liked the funny, inhumane rhymes LOL
I love send ups of ruthless people.
I vote for this one because it sounds just like some people may review. I know this is supposed to be funny in the contest entry, but when it's really something real like this it can hurt the heart to the bone. So I think this is a good example of how 'not' to give a review...
If stars have to be taken away to draw attention then so be it, or mistakes called upon to learn where that mistake give it in kindness. Salt don't heal the wound of the torn heart......so just remember this reviewers. Especially if someone is 'new' help them instead of hurting them. We all have been there before...
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