Good taut story line, good characterisation , good outcome well done Cass
The ending was so unexpected, it gave me a shock!
Yikes! An interesting story and a well thought out plot.
The ending makes you a tad sick, and also wanting more.
You held my interest the entire time and I think it was a
good response to the prompt.
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