Characters are well developed through description and dialogue, and the irony in the ending is humorous.
The other two were a little predictable. 'The Love Note' wins my vote.
Three great flash entries... all excellent in their unique different ways. I was amused and shocked by all.
Definitely had the best surprise ending.
Loved the darkness...
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