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The Farmer's Daughter by Honeycomb

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wow- what a outstanding poem. The rhyme, the rhythm, timing, all perfect. Very clever and it does tell it's self. This was the perfect poem to return to Nancy, it will only let me give you a five but I gave you two fives and a four :)
Comment Written by oNray on 24-Sep-2014

As Time Went By by Honeycomb

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check it out- they will let we rate this but gave me no "6"
Enjoued this Nancy. You send emotions, and loss and love with your words. Very nicely done dear friend
Comment Written by oNray on 07-May-2014

Night And Day by Honeycomb

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outstanding wording and rhythm, loved it. this thing appears to be letting me rate this but a five is the best they gave me. Hope you are well :)
Comment Written by oNray on 01-Mar-2014

Within Love's Glow by Honeycomb

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Don't get a six to give but you would have got it if that gave me one. I can relate to this remarkable poem Nancy :) The inter love here just breaths the happiness two can have
Comment Written by oNray on 18-Jan-2014

The Christmas Tree by Honeycomb

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See, you "done good" I enjoyed it and have to applaud your gift to the cat. I am allergic to cats, but have the neatest story I tell about the agreement one cat and I had. Enjoy your Christmas Nancy- Best wishes for your health :0
Comment Written by oNray on 22-Dec-2013

~The Answer~ by Honeycomb

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that muse came back strong. Outstand message and rhyme.My muse must mave gotten hit by a garbage truck. I am so tired of trying to force one out so I'll wait untill it llows out
Comment Written by oNray on 02-Dec-2013

Can't Fight It by Honeycomb

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at least you can type! If only a muse was like good old murphy- he helps me with every thing. Are you the red head? My family has many red heads- I am the blond of the family
Comment Written by oNray on 02-Dec-2013

~Winter White~ by Honeycomb

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nicely stated.We can drag out our cry baby soapboxes now. I was so active and we loved the snow. The more we got - the more we loved it. Snowmobiles, four wheel drives. and just outdoor fun, now not so much
Comment Written by oNray on 21-Nov-2013

~Solace~ by Honeycomb

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Another nice poem. I enjoy nature off all kinds and your poem and picture work so well togather. I know nature was not your main thought but you used it well
Comment Written by oNray on 19-Nov-2013

~Windows To The Past ~ by Honeycomb

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very nice, you express feelings so well Nancy. I seem to feel your words and that is what poetry is all about. Speak your mind so well that others feel as you do
Comment Written by oNray on 17-Nov-2013


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