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Rose Hearth

haiku (mountain stream) by MoonWillow

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What a wonderful haiku. The imagery is great and I love the double entendre of your satori..sea/see. I like this variation of the long/short/long/format.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013

Linda's Worth by reconciled

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Michael! You've done it again! This is an absolutely wonderful and brilliant ode to women. May I have your permission to read it to my support group?
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013

Drifting by Perp Ihebom

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This is a beautiful thoughtful poem. I really like the abba rhyme scheme. I also like the sentiment you put forth. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013

Tanka (tropical haven) by sunnilicious

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I love Key Biscayne and this is a beautiful description of it. However, the organizer was very clear about following the format. As s/he does not state that multiple stanzas are acceptable, I am rating based on the description in Poetry Dances.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013
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acceptance by jaliscomel

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I just double checked the format for a Tanka in both Poetry dances and a googled website. Syllable count 5/7/5/7/7. Neither the original, nor the translation adheres to this. Please let me know if you change it. Thank you.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013
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Tanka (Clandestine viewing) by Cariboubill

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Well, I don't see the 'deep' emotion that is typically expressed in Tanka, but I did get a good chuckle and you maintained structure. Good job.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

My Grandson by Barb Hensongispsaca
Chapter 6 of the book Family

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Excellent work, my friend. You have managed to express your pride in both your child and grandchild in one fell swoop. Good luck.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013
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Huckleberry Freedom by Gypsy Starchild

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I really enjoyed this whistful Tanka. It reads like a lazy summer afternoon down by the creek with fishing pole in hand! Best of luck to you!
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 31-Mar-2013
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

Not Exactly As Expected... by seewhatimwritingnow

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Wow! Most of these are so negative. I wonder why online dating is so popular? lol I guess that's why the webcam is such a good idea. Great job! It has a very nice flow and excellent rhyme scheme.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 10-Mar-2013

An Internet Romance by Giddy Nielsen-Sweep

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This sounds like any relationship in which people think that the one they want will change into the one they think they should be.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 10-Mar-2013


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