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Rose Hearth

Too Much by Linda England Bonam

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But, Mr. Banker, I can't be overdrawn. I still have checks!

I like the twist of "living the dream". We work so hard, often to have everything go awry because of our health. It sounds as if she is maintaining a positive attitude which is healthy.
Best of luck to her.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 28-Aug-2014

Life Goes To The Birds by Linda England Bonam

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LOL! Yes, the birds have it in for us! I've also wondered why they pass up the greenery they should be "fertilizing" to dive bomb cars, etc.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 28-Aug-2014

Bookmark by Tonulak

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This is a beautiful free verse. The elusive, yet exhilarating tone really drew me in. I rather enjoyed the anonymity of the final line...
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 28-Aug-2014

Wall Walking by reconciled

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Michael,
I've been gone for over a year and I can really see how much your poetry has evolved over that time. Nice alliteration.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 28-Aug-2014

Hoping To Find Me by Linda England Bonam

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Beautiful poem, Linda. I hope you find what you're looking for (yourself) on this never ending journey. Until you do, though... enjoy the ride!
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 28-Aug-2014

Pure Fidelity-Without Trust by michaelcahill

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I think you have a very good chance of winning this contest based on the layout alone. It's been my experience that most people wouldn't marry somebody they didn't trust and if they lose that trust, there is usually a good reason. Until I read your notes, I thought you were using Pure Fidelity sarcastically because that side of the poem reads like the Pure BS that cheaters start spewing when confronted. Either way it's interpreted, it makes for a very good read!!!!
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 21-Aug-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.

The Harley Ride by Linda England Bonam

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Linda, I really love your writing style. It's always easy to see the "state" you are in. This poem is so full of anticipation, excitement, and finally the desire to get HOME. Great vacation poetry and seems like you had a great time, too.
Rose
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 17-Aug-2014

Left Behind by reconciled

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I thought your heart was broken, but glad to see that it was just a prequel to the love that found you!!! I enjoyed your use of alliteration.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 17-Aug-2014

Depression Will Always Suck by ExperiencingLiphe

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This is such a touching acrostic that really captures the essence of depression...the masks we wear, the sense of being alone, the hopelessness...it's all there. Just one question though, Is there more than one number for the National Suicide Prevention Hotline? The last time I had to use it, the number was 1-800-SUICIDE. So, yes, I'm living proof that it does get better, even if there are setbacks.
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 16-Aug-2014

Koko Cried by pipersfancy

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Kudos for Koko Cried! I've watched the video of Robin and Koko several times, always touched by it, and usually for a different reason each time. This was a wonderful tribute to the "humanitarian" side of this man that many only saw as comic genius. Best of luck in the contest!

Thank goodness you replied to my review! The four star rating was an accident. I meant to give it 5, but only because I'm out of sixes!!!
Comment Written by Rose Hearth on 16-Aug-2014
Read and reviewed with blinders on.


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