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Corfe and its castle by Nosha17

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Dear Faye,
From sylvan glades to wonderful historic monuments and the call of derring do attached to them, you capture not only the picture but the soul of the scene. Great writing.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 29-Aug-2014

Cruising Without Connection by Connie C

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My dear Connie,
Beautifully presented in solid rhyme and immaculate metre, this one takes me back to those glorious days when one went on holiday to get away from everything. Truly a catharsis to clear away tensions and relax. I will confess neither my wife or I can understand you youngsters' seeming addiction to the I world. (Relax, just a grumpy old man speaking)
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 29-Aug-2014

I Want To Break Free by Domino 2

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Dear Ray,
I see you won and quite rightly. I didn't see the other entries, but I don't need to. This runs like cream and punches like Ali. Great writing.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 29-Aug-2014

Where's Rupert? by kiwisteveh

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Dear Steve,
This deserves far more than the meagre six stars available. It is right up there or even higher than Dr Seuss, Kipling and Carrol in its mtre, rhyme and use of such gorgeous phrasing as
boisterous, roisterous sea
and
rascally, ratbag rapscallion.

all guaranteed to grab kids attention (They certainly got mine). I do hope you win!!!

By the way, I see from your profile you are back with the long white cloud. Nice to be home? Particularly after that last match. Grrrrrrrr....
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 29-Aug-2014

Fanstory by rama devi

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Dear rd,
Love the "late night keyboard tappers". So descriptive of the addicts who occupy this site. Also love the internal rhymes that spring out at one when unexpected in what appears to be free verse.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 29-Aug-2014

Don't Stop Me Now by bard owl

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Dear Linda,
You, my dear, can write my biography. I was once a young Captain in His Majesty's army and, although I cannot claim all the success you attribute to your hero, I was able to sweep off her feet the girl who became my wife of 65 years. I, however, was neither dark nor handsome, but I was tall. Beautiful poetry, by the way. Deserving of a gong. LOL
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 26-Aug-2014

If I Controlled Life's Ticking Clock by adewpearl

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Dear Brooke,
I know and understand the feeling. How lovely it would be if we could just snatch those very special moments and cryo-freeze them for later re-invigoration. That way we could still enjoy the passing parade, while having the means to relive the highlights. Maybe, though, they might diminish in repetition. Let's stay with the memory banks that God gave us.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 26-Aug-2014

Captive by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dear Dawn,
Your poetic technique certainly shows in this well constructed set of couplets and your feeling for lost love is even more poignant than usual.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 26-Aug-2014

Reflections on a Stormy Day by Nosha17

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Dear Faye,
Another great addition to your long line of beautiful idylls. It is of course ironic that that the very rotten weather that plagues us, is also the reason for the outstanding views.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 26-Aug-2014

Mature Reluctance by Ideasaregems-Dawn

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Dear Dawn,
Well, this was not the response I would have hoped to evoke with the "proposal" poem, but I have to give you marks for excellent poetic construction. Poor bugger....he was hoping for so much.
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Comment Written by rhymelord on 26-Aug-2014


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