Ode to Alexandra, my granddaughter.
A thoroughly charming piece that only a Nana could write. I love it, but I do have a minor suggestion. The line:
"They sparkle like the dew. "
is the only line in trimester in the poem. Nothing wrong with trimeter, provided that it is counted to be used in each second line. As it is I did find I stumbled on line 4 stanza 1, because I was expecting another trimeter line. May I suggest this line is amended as follows:
"They sparkle like the morning dew. "
or such like.
Hope this helps,
Comment Written by rhymelord on 27-Sep-2014