Spiritual Poems
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4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A very revealing self-reflection, Dawn -- and touches upon many feelings shared by many who feel isolated and alone and with too much time on their hands to reflect themselves.... well written from pen to heart! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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A very revealing self-reflection, Dawn -- and touches upon many feelings shared by many who feel isolated and alone and with too much time on their hands to reflect themselves.... well written from pen to heart! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 27-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2020
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Thank you, Yvette. :)
Comment from Joan E.
Although your poem in rhymed couplets is categorized as "general," I see many personal elements in it, such as turning one's back and losing one's way. For most of us, the "journey is all uphill"! I hope your loved one "will not have to go". Warm regards- Joan
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Although your poem in rhymed couplets is categorized as "general," I see many personal elements in it, such as turning one's back and losing one's way. For most of us, the "journey is all uphill"! I hope your loved one "will not have to go". Warm regards- Joan
Comment Written 25-Jul-2020
Comment from jaded831
Your words were woven into a beautiful tapestry. I relished each word and felt emotion in every line. I felt it an abstract poem. I feel it captured a confused soul straying from childhood faith.
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Your words were woven into a beautiful tapestry. I relished each word and felt emotion in every line. I felt it an abstract poem. I feel it captured a confused soul straying from childhood faith.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your faithful words sunk straight into my heart here Dawn, the flow of well chosen words are like silk wafting in the breeze and your message is clear and your couplet is poignant, a skilfully written poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Your faithful words sunk straight into my heart here Dawn, the flow of well chosen words are like silk wafting in the breeze and your message is clear and your couplet is poignant, a skilfully written poem, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2020
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Oh Dolly, thank you! What a kind, encouraging review!
