Winners and Losers
Do you have the courage?14 total reviews
Comment from Dick Waters
Although I entered this contest, I love your entry. The photo is a great start, making some envious of the man.
Your poem has the right scentimemts, showing a great contrast.
Your comment under the poem is perfect.
Very nicely done.
Thanks for sharing!
Dick
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Although I entered this contest, I love your entry. The photo is a great start, making some envious of the man.
Your poem has the right scentimemts, showing a great contrast.
Your comment under the poem is perfect.
Very nicely done.
Thanks for sharing!
Dick
Comment Written 10-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 10-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
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I appreciate the comment on my post and hopefully we will meet again.
Many Thanks,
Dick
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, Winners and Losers, has the required lines and delineates the two extremes as those who never fail and those who at least try.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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This six-line poem, Winners and Losers, has the required lines and delineates the two extremes as those who never fail and those who at least try.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from jaded831
Your poem is inspiring. I don't take enough risks. I like to call it being careful, but I can be to careful. Your poem is smooth and easy to understand and has universal appeal. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Your poem is inspiring. I don't take enough risks. I like to call it being careful, but I can be to careful. Your poem is smooth and easy to understand and has universal appeal. You should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a strong entry for the Six Line Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope it does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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This is a strong entry for the Six Line Poem writing prompt. I enjoyed reading this poem. I hope it does well in the contest. Great good luck to you!
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Wonderful entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest. Nice presentation.
- I like the rhymed poetic form, it is one of my favorites. -
- passion is a very especial emotion...good choice. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Hello anonymous
Wonderful entry for the Emotions writing prompt contest. Nice presentation.
- I like the rhymed poetic form, it is one of my favorites. -
- passion is a very especial emotion...good choice. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2020
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your six line poem is excellent in all respects. It uses specific, vivid details
to contrast those who really live life and those who merely exist, the ones who look back in regret. Also excellent in form
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Your six line poem is excellent in all respects. It uses specific, vivid details
to contrast those who really live life and those who merely exist, the ones who look back in regret. Also excellent in form
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Mark Valentine
Excellent words of wisdom expressed with great rhyme and meter. Should be a contender in the contest. One spelling issue - this may be a regional thing, but, at least in the USA, the gerund of regret is spelled with 2 't's - regretting.
Loved the poem.
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Excellent words of wisdom expressed with great rhyme and meter. Should be a contender in the contest. One spelling issue - this may be a regional thing, but, at least in the USA, the gerund of regret is spelled with 2 't's - regretting.
Loved the poem.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written six-line poem about being afraid sometimes to take a chance and ending up regretting that we let an opportunity passing us by to find the love we crave for.
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A very well-written six-line poem about being afraid sometimes to take a chance and ending up regretting that we let an opportunity passing us by to find the love we crave for.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from Bobby Cunningham
We truly wish we had a 6тн? review Left to give. We believe this is a clear winner in the contest. The photo is lovely and the poem itself is exceptional, perfect rhyming, nice flow and a profound message. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
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We truly wish we had a 6тн? review Left to give. We believe this is a clear winner in the contest. The photo is lovely and the poem itself is exceptional, perfect rhyming, nice flow and a profound message. Best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
Comment from papa55mike
I guess that's one definition of being a winner. I would rather be blessed and loved. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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I guess that's one definition of being a winner. I would rather be blessed and loved. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Jun-2020
